Sunday, September 30, 2007

Discussion of "The Feast of Love"

First: Hello to all whom I haven't heard from in some time. I'm excited to be able to reconnect through this thing. How is everyone?

Second: Hi, Joe! (The circle of people I know is now complete [by my own admission, it's a small circle.]) For those of you who don't know Joe, Joe and I completed our MFAs at Oregon State last June. Now he lives in the Louisville/Boulder area. He's a great reader and a terrific writer, so if he can be persuaded to share some of his fiction, I'm sure we'll all enjoy it.

Third: "The Feast of Love" by Charles Baxter, the man who brought us "Burning Down the House" and "defamiliarization."

So maybe I've cheated with this book. I am only halfway through the novel, but I went to see the film last night. The book is a compilation of first-person narratives held together by the "narrator" Charles Baxter (his "character" name in the novel). I read an excerpt of a review of the book, and apparently, this fragmented style grew out of Baxter's self-proclaimed flaw, an inability to structure a "conventional" and linear work. This--which is similar to Tim O'Brien's "July, July"--must be the easiest way to write a novel, it seems. Perhaps that's only my naivete talking. Still, you write a few stories, string them together with little interstitials...voila! Thoughts? Anyone tried this?

Not surprisingly, the film eliminated the narrator character and combined some of his introspective, wise traits with that of another character. Too literary, I guess. Also, the characters felt a bit thin to me. Because the novel devotes 300+ pages to shaping and crafting these folks, there are some things that a few well-placed images and lines of dialogue just can't quite accomplish.

It's been said/written that the book is about "love in all of its miraculous, transforming manifestations." Or something like that. But what a bunch of shortchanging bullshit, really. The novel delves much deeper into uncertain psychological ground. Love as terror. Love as a form of myopia. Love as self-loathing, among all other things. Because--and only because--these characters are so specific and finely shaded, the book takes on larger significance and earns a worthiness of the use of "love."

I guess I should provide a bit of a concrete plot summary. Baxter, as the narrator and author, encounters several people (in his town of Ann Arbor, Michigan--relocated to Portland, Oregon, in the movie connected to his friend Bradley W. Smith. There's Bradley's first wife, Kathryn, who falls in love with another woman and his second wife, Diana, who's been in love with another man since before she met Bradley. Then there's Bradley, Jr., Bradley's dog; Bradley's neighbors Harry and Ethel, whose grown son calls to spew curses and demand money; Bradley's coffee shop employees, Chloe and Oscar; and a slew of what might be termed more minor characters, all of whom are, by turns, changed, slayed, elated, denied, created by love.

Long live the short story, even if this is the only way to preserve it.

4 comments:

Joe said...

Hi Amanda. Thanks for the review. And, hi Amanda! L.A.?

I think that I understand what Amanda's getting at regarding this fragmented novel approach. Even with my amateurish stab at a novel, I've started down that track--short-ish "scenes," each with the structure of a short story--or elements of short stories--or plotless fragments that seem to support the overall arc. It seems like the toughest thing in the world to write a novel with seamless transitions. Even in a short story.

The latest issue of the New Yorker has a mind-blowing story by Robert Bolano that features ZERO fuckin' section breaks and decades upon decades of action packed into a few pages. You should all check it out if you have time/effort/interest. For me, it wasn't so much enjoyable as revealing, depressing, and intimidating.

Amanda, I've had the same problem with finishing a story. Everything I've written since May has been pretty stankalicious.

Joe said...

Addendum: Bolano does use section breaks. Oops. But very few, considering. And his transitions, overall, are too much.

Ali said...

It's amazing how short story cycles are growing more and more common and popular.

About two years ago I took a seminar class with Cindy about them and the things we talked about there are becoming more and more relevant.

I'll be on the lookout for Baxter's book the next time I go to the library, you've sold me.

Mishell said...

Howdy-do, Amanda! It's been a long time. I've missed having you in workshops. Always very helpful you are. (Look at me, gettin' all Yoda-speak on ya!)

I haven't read the novel, yet, but I was just thinking about this type of snapshot writing the other day. I was wondering if it isn't a product of our society's ever-shortening attention span, both on the part of the writer and the reader. (I know that I have a problem writing stories longer than 3 to 5 pages, but then, I think maybe that's David's fault. Hee-hee.) But really, don't we, as a collective, just love things that offer that quick 1-2 punch? That kapow that knocks us off our feet in under 15 minutes? We don't have time to absorb atmosphere, culture, and heartfelt postulations. Just put it in a slurpy cup and let me get on my way.

BTW Ali--nice use of the word "stankalicious." We must keep it up so that it may one day join the ranks of ginormous in Websters dictionary.)